Friday, December 30, 2005

Fiction Friday - Back by popular demand!



Pleasure After Business


Noel sat at the end of the bar where she could see everyone that entered. It was a small local bar filled with smoke and business men. Finally she saw him, the man she was waiting for. He was tall and well built with dark hair and eyes. The grey business suit he wore blended in with the other men as he took a seat in the middle of the bar. Noel ordered a another drink for herself and second one for him. She motioned for him to join her when the bartender pointed her out.

"Thanks for the drink." He said as he stared at her chest. She turned towards him and his eyes moved down to the short black skirt that showed off most of her long shapely legs.

"You're welcome. Have a seat."

After a little conversation and a few more drinks for him they decided to leave the bar. He drove them to the nearest cheap hotel and checked them in while she waited. As soon as they were in the room she pressed herself against him. As they kissed she slipped his jacket off and he began unbuttoning her deep red blouse revealing a black silk bra. She pulled him towards the bed and sat on the end. Kneeling before her he kissed her neck moving lower. She pressed his head against her breasts and reached behind her for the dagger hidden in her waistband.

He died quickly and quietly, just how she liked it. She buttoned her blouse and retrieved his keys from the jacket lying in the floor. In the backseat of the car she found his briefcase and the disc she was sent to retreive. A quick drop-off and her business would be done. Noel smiled to herself. With her business finished so early, there was plenty of time to go out for a little fun.




For the next chapter in Noel's story see Chris.

7 comments:

Kat said...

I hope this turned out ok. I put in a lot of the details while loopy on cold meds last night!

bubbles said...

WOW! A little on the Alias side eh?! I like it! NIce to see you back on the Fiction Friday road!

We did it Chris! LOL!

Chris said...

WooHoo! Fiction Friday returns in grand style. I love it! It has everything I like in a story: a pretty girl, sex, adventure and killing.

Nicely done, Kat. :)

Xmichra said...

That rocked Kat! I especial;y like how you names your main "Noel".. very seasonal of you *wink*!!

Also like the connection (If??) to your HNT pic and the description of the assasin. Vey cool role playing.

Well done Kat.

Anonymous said...

WOW! Kat I love your writing.
Good writing for me is when I read the story I can see the characters, the background, hear the sounds, you NAILED this perfectly.
I WANT more, I shall return my friend, great stuff and yes the connection with your HNT photo is perfect.
Cheap Motel eh? the guy deserved to lose his disc.lol
Tc

purplesime said...

Okay, I loved this story, really enjoyed it.

Just had to add you to my list of blogs to keep an eye on. It's like the Blogger list, but better quality. :)

I look forward to many more repeat visits and more Friday Fiction.

purplesimon out...

Tamarai said...

Never been involved with this before, but this looks like fun.