A Scorned Woman
Betrayal. Broken. Lonely. Sometimes those aren't just words. Sometimes they are deep feelings that can acutally make your chest hurt. Like someone has torn your heart from your chest and left an empty, gaping hole. I loved him. Trusted him. I was a fool.
There are worse things than physical pain. Worse things.
He promised not to hurt me. He lied.
He won't do it again.
8 comments:
Hmmm... this is probably not a good time to be a first time visitor. But hey... I do like the song that you've got playing in the background.
Cheers!
Looks like the 20th was a day for venting the pain, eh?
Well crafted, the emotion drips from your words.
T
He won't do it again eh? hehe! Short, sweet, and too the point! Nice!
wicked. could be a set up from your prievious Noel stories.. could be a stand alone. Nicely done.
Thank you everyone.
I was inspired to write this after reading Tanya's Aftermath. It just boiled up from the back of me and had to come out.
sorry, off topic. you can go back and try the link again. I messed with my settings.. so I had to fix it up! Thanks for letting me know!
Nice one. And yes, it provides an excellent counterpoint to Tanya's story. I love what you can do with only a few words, Kat.
Another great story, and posted just under the wire, I see. ;)
I'm wondering what comes next...what makes sure he'll never do it again...great foreshadowning!
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